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                          Digital Story 3 Peer Grading 05/26/2010
                          61 Comments
                           
                          Watch and review two student stories for Digital Movie #3. Post your rubric scores and thoughts for each below.
                           


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                          Angelia Lewis
                          05/25/2010 05:41

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                          Nick Martucci
                          05/25/2010 05:49

                          I have seen Jennifer Carullo and Brianni Vincent's Blog. Their digital story's are both very informative and right to the point. They are also very creative I feel they both deserve a 40/40!

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                          Jen Carullo
                          05/25/2010 05:50

                          Brianni Vincent: 35/40
                          The pictures and story line were strong, although it was not from any point of view. The music was clear, but it didn't relate to the story, as spanish music have would. Overall, it was very good story and it as very informative.

                          Nicholas Martucci: 36/40
                          Nick's story line and layout were very strong and creative. The voice narration could have been done a bit louder and clearer, but overall it was very good.

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                          Angelia Lewis
                          05/25/2010 05:57

                          I watched Jen Carullo's video & Brianni Vincent's video .
                          I give Jen's video a 38/40 . Pictures were very clear , text easy to read , & the song went well . I liked that her video focused on multiple problems & told relevant information that was important & well detailed (:
                          I also gave Brianni's video a 38/40 . Her pictures , text , & song went well too . Everything was easy to understand & told most important details . I liked that her video was about a unique world event (:

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                          Nicholas Arcieri
                          05/25/2010 05:59

                          Jen Carullo 35/40
                          Nicholas Martucci 35/40

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                          Brianni Vincent
                          05/25/2010 06:06

                          Jennifer Carullo
                          40/40
                          I thought that Jen's digital story was great! It informed me about all the world disasters that have occured. The pictures were great & the song went along with it wonderfully!

                          Nicholas Martucci
                          40/40
                          I thought Nick's digital story was good. He used voice narration which is a plus since not many people used it. He also used a song in the background. The pictures were great & the end result was perfect.

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                          Shara Joy Aya
                          05/25/2010 07:33

                          Celeste Chow
                          39/40
                          overall, the story was good! it could of been longer though. i really liked the topic, too!

                          Emily Fauske
                          38/40
                          Good job! story was good! but i couldn't read the font that well.

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                          Emily Fauske
                          05/25/2010 07:37

                          I have graded celeste chow's digital story. I have given her a 38 out of 40. The message she got across was very well presented and i liked her pictures.. Good job.

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                          Celeste Chow
                          05/25/2010 07:38

                          Emily Fauske
                          38/40
                          Good topic and pictures Emily. The music went very good with your video except some of the text was hard to read.

                          Shara Joy Aya
                          38/40
                          Good job. You had good pictures and the text was good too but some of it was small, which made it hard to read. Good music

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                          Emily Fauske
                          05/25/2010 07:42

                          I have graded Shara Joy Aya's digital story. I have given her a 39/40. I liked how her song was in Japanese, it was very creative.

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                          gabby lafata
                          05/25/2010 11:14

                          the video that i watched was Emily Fauske and Trevor Gnyp. Emily Fauske talked about Haiti it was interesting her story had a point and the song was perfect with the video i give her 39/40. Trevor Gnyp video was about graffiti, his video was something that interested him, which made it cool his video was little short but it still was really good and i liked the pictures i would give him a 37/40

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                          Lori Lee
                          05/26/2010 06:24

                          Jen Carullo [38/40]
                          The video was overall good. The text and pictures were clear and the music matched well. She showed the message of the video with the natural disasters.

                          Nicholas Martucci [36/40]
                          His voice narration was quite low and it was hard to hear unless you put the volume up. Also some of the pics were low quality, but he did a good job on the narration matching the pictures.

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                          Karis Robichaud
                          05/26/2010 06:37

                          Caroline Pinsky:
                          Caroline's Video was very informative.I thought her pictures really showed how important saving dolphins are. The music and text was very clear as well. I give her a 38/40

                          Madison Lock :
                          Besides Caroline's video i saw Madison's as well. Her video was too cute. It really made me feel i should save a panda. Her pictures were very clear and the song went very well with her video. I give her 38/40

                          Both videos were very unique !

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                          sierra white
                          05/26/2010 06:46

                          i saw brianni vincent and courtney springers digital stories and they were both very good and well done. the songs matched the story and the pictures were clear. i give them both a 40/40

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                          Nicole orlando
                          05/26/2010 06:47

                          Michael O. 35/40
                          I have seen michaels story and it was on the Civil Right Movement. His pictures and music went very well with the idea of the whole project. Everything was also timed correctly and well thought out.

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                          Nicole orlando
                          05/26/2010 06:51

                          Jen Carullo 35/40
                          I have seen Jen Carullos digital story and it was also very well thought out and informative too her idea. The music and narration was good also.

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                          Chris Hepworth
                          05/26/2010 06:54

                          I graded NIck Martucci's video and Leorie Beriguete's video. Both videos were pretty good but Nick's had voice narration and Leorie's didn't. Leorie had better transitions than Nick though. I give Nick a 37/40 and Leorie a 36/40.

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                          Michael Odumosu
                          05/26/2010 06:56

                          I have looked at Nicole's and Akeem's Digital Stories. They both express great qualities of pictures and music. What I like about their movies is that they made it clear what their movies are about. In Nicole's movie it was very clear that she was talking about 9/11. In Akeem's movie he shows about the olympics.

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                          Caroline
                          05/26/2010 06:57

                          Karis's video was very good. It showed that she knew a lot about her subject. The music went along very well with her Digital Story. The pictures and text went very well ... I give her a 39/40

                          Leorie's Video was very informative.He gave good information on the earthquake in Haiti. I really liked the pictures and music that went along great.
                          I give him a 39/40 too.

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                          Madison Lock
                          05/26/2010 06:58

                          Justina Konarzewska:
                          I gave her a 38/40 because her pictures were good and her song went well with the movie. She did good.

                          Nicolette Delgado:
                          I give her the same grade as Justina because her iMovie was good and the song was the same as in the animal shelter commercials =)

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                          Megan del Rosario
                          05/26/2010 08:21

                          Shara Joy Aya - 38/40
                          I thought the pictures in this digital story were very good. But the font was just too small. But overall everything else was good, the pictures, the song. :D

                          Celeste Chow - 38/40
                          The font was to small. It also could've been longer. But the pictures and audio went well the digital story :D

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                          Michael Luppino
                          05/26/2010 08:24

                          Alex Garcia: 39/40. His images were well placed and the music was uplifting. It could've been a little longer. The best part was the bell sounds in between the main music; it fits so well! Great job!

                          Kaan Bulut: 39/40. His video had good images and the meaning of the video was deep towards those who suffered in the oil spill.

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                          William Ao
                          05/26/2010 11:16

                          I give Nick Martucci a 35 and Philip Aleman a 31. Phil gets a 31 because he didnt have music in it , not that its a important factor , but still. Nick gets a 35 for his work and quality.

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                          William Ao
                          05/26/2010 11:16

                          I give Nick Martucci a 35 and Philip Aleman a 31. Phil gets a 31 because he didnt have music in it , not that its a important factor , but still. Nick gets a 35 for his work and quality.

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                          Meagan Edwards
                          05/26/2010 11:25

                          I watched Jayde Bressie's and Jen Carullo's videos and they had alot of similarities. Jayde's video was about the attack on the twin towers in 2001. She used strong images and text to explain her story. I give her an 36/40. In Jen's video she talked about world disaster, including using the event about 9/11. She also used strong pictures and text to explain her story. Her music also matched with her story I give her a 40/40

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                          Tyler Leung
                          05/26/2010 11:26

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                          donna cucuzza link
                          05/26/2010 11:30

                          emily fauske:38/40
                          had very good picture, the song matched well and brings hope to haiti. i also graded
                          shara joy aya:38/40
                          she has very interested music with here movie she did it about disasters like earthquake. very good

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                          Victoria Heshme
                          05/26/2010 11:30

                          I graded 2 people for digital story 3.

                          Kim Hernandez : The Video was very good. The Sound effects were really good, and the story was very interesting. All the sound effects went with the digital story. I would grade this a 39/40. :)

                          I also graded

                          Lorie lee : This video was very good, the video and the music worked in very good with the digital story also. The images were also good. I give this story a 38/40. :)

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                          Tyler Leung
                          05/26/2010 11:31

                          I watched Michael Luppino's video. We had the same topic but he did not tell it from the perspective of someone other than himself. It was also too short, but he used useful pictures and a fitting song. I give him a 30/40. I also watched Nick Martucci's video. It was about Global Warming. He also used good pictures but used voice narration. His paradigm shift was good as well. I give him 36/40.

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                          Katherine Foote
                          05/26/2010 17:22

                          I graded Gabrielle La Fata and Caroline Pinsky.

                          Gabrielle: 38/40
                          The pictures were paced very well and went with the music. At some points, the words either became too small to read or the color blended in with the background.

                          Caroline: 39/40
                          The pictures were clear and went with the song. I liked how she put the URLs to dolphin conservation sites in her video.

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                          Vickie Prevosti
                          05/26/2010 18:18

                          I viewed Brianni and Leorie's blogs. Here is how I graded them:

                          Leorie: 38/40
                          Leo gave a good storyline and showed different points of views. His story had facts and information as well as a good song. The only thing about Leo's video that was hard to understand was some of the words because they clended in or went too fast. He had nice transformations though.

                          Brianni:36/40
                          Brianni had a lot of good information about Cinco De Mayo but it didn't come from a specific point of view and the song somewhat related but it would have been better with a spanish song. The pictures went really good with the text and there was enough time to read all of it.

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                          Gabriel Eustache
                          05/27/2010 05:42

                          I graded Leorie B. I gave him a 37/40 because everything was good, his song was good as well. But the timing was not to good.

                          I graded Emily F. I gave her a 40/40, because everything was described well. Emilys pictures were clear also her song was very good.

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                          Brandon Helfer
                          05/27/2010 05:57

                          I graded Kevin Cahill and Philip Aleman, Kevin Cahill got a 37/40, because he had a very good video and it was about the Mets, and Phil got a 33/40, because it was very good but had no sound

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                          Nicolette Delgado
                          05/27/2010 06:01

                          Madison Lock:
                          39/40
                          she had good music and the point of the story was clear. She had good pictures but some of the words were hard to read.

                          Brianni Vincent:
                          40/40
                          She told me a story about the topic and the pictures were good. The music went well with the pictures also. I could easily read the words.

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                          Ajene Meyers
                          05/27/2010 07:24

                          Madison Lock:
                          38/40
                          her concept was overall very entertaining. She had good clear pictures however some of the words were hard to read.

                          Courtney Springer:
                          40/40

                          Courtney's concept is very different. the comparison between the italian christmas and the american christmas was very entertaining.

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                          Justina Konarzewska
                          05/27/2010 07:25

                          ve watched kevins and courtneys and they both get a 39/40 : they both had very clear pictures and the song plays along with the subject of there movie. i think both movies are very creative and thoughtful.

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                          Courtney Springer
                          05/27/2010 07:27

                          I graded Justina's and Ajene's digital story #3. I gave Justina a 38. She had clear pictures and a good topic. I gave Ajene a 32. SHe had clear pictures but she didnt have any usic which would enhance her video.

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                          Reshay Bailey
                          05/27/2010 07:28

                          i viewed Brianni Vinicent and Nicholas Martucci's video. each of their videos were really nice and it got straight to the point. it was inforative and very understanding. they each deserve a 40/40.

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                          Arlinda Draga
                          05/27/2010 07:34

                          I have just viewed Leorie's and Nicole's video. Each of them out a lot of time and hard work in their videos. They both made a point and made me more aware of world events. If I had to grade them I would give Nicole a 35/40 because there is still room for improvement. I would give Leorie a 40/40 because he did a fantastic job.

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                          Stephen Gross
                          05/27/2010 07:34

                          I graded Kevin Cahill's and Kaan Bulut's videos. Kevin's video was about the Mets and Kaan's video was about the Gulf Coast oil spill. I gave Kevin a 38/40 because his video had good images and lots of information. However, his music was kind of ehhhh. I gave Kaan a 36/40 because he had a lot of good images and good music, but not a lot of information.

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                          Hayward Yatco
                          05/27/2010 07:42

                          i watched/graded Kaan Bulut's video and his music went along with his digital story and he explained what happened with the oil spill. I gave him a 34/40.
                          I also watched/graded Emily Fauske's video and her music also went along with her digital story. Clearly said what happened in the earthquake in Haiti. i give her a 36/40.

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                          Jennifer Siliato
                          05/27/2010 07:49

                          Jen Carullo
                          35/40
                          I think she did very well to incorporate the disasters and inform people but it was from one perspective. The music fit nicely.



                          Hayward Yatco
                          35/40
                          His video was from a perspective of someone going threw the world hunger that we face. People don't understand the things that happen with hunger around th world and i think that his video is very informing. His music and captioning is also very good.

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                          Brittni bjornholm
                          05/27/2010 10:57

                          I graded Emily Fauske and Shara Joy Aya . I gave them both a 38/40. They both used music that went with their pictures and even though Shara's was in a different language, it sounded like it went well with the pictures and video.

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                          Anita Kathleen Platis
                          05/27/2010 11:07

                          The digital stories I graded were Katherine Kelly's and Karis Robichaud's. I gave Kay a 30/40. Her story has a lot of pictures that maintained a focus throughout but it lacked voice narration/music and the order of the pictures were a little out of place. I gave Karis a 36/40. Her story also had a lot of pictures and maintained its focus, but there were some grammar mistakes. Both stories were overall really good though, and I enjoyed watching them both! :D

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                          Danielle DeRenzo
                          05/27/2010 11:12

                          leorie beriguete
                          [ 40 /40] The video was good. The text and
                          pictures were clear and the music matched well
                          Lori Lee
                          [40/40] i thought the video was good and it was a good choice of song

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                          katherine kelly
                          05/27/2010 11:16

                          i graded anita platis and karis. anita got a 40/40. all her work was organized and she has a voice narrative and karis got a 38/40.

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                          Sean Geissler
                          05/27/2010 18:40

                          Jennifer Siliato: 38/40 The pictures and story line were strong and had a good point of view. The music/voice was was good and the story made sense.

                          Brinni Vincent: 35/40 The pictures are clear and have a story line. The story does not a have a good point of view. Good voice narration.

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                          Ewa Wawrzonek
                          05/27/2010 20:20

                          I watched Charlene and Katherine's videos.I would give them both a 40/40 because they both have great images and voice narration.

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                          Philip Aleman
                          05/28/2010 07:20

                          I graded three other peoples digital stories.
                          I gave Brandon Helfer a 37 out of 40, his story was pretty good, but the music was kind of low and muffled.
                          I gave Elliot Santiago a 36 out of 40, i gave him this grade because i don't get how a comic book is a cultural phenomena.
                          I gave Alex Garcia a 39 out of 40, his video really revealed the affects of poverty in the world.

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                          Caroline Swift
                          05/28/2010 07:25

                          Lizette Cruz:
                          I graded Lizette's video. She had such a strong message throughout the entire digital story. It was about the water crisis in Africa. The music was powerful and clear, and she had a very good video as evidence of the topic. I gave her video a 39/40.

                          Elliot Santiago:
                          Elliot's video was extremely unique. He decided to make his video like a movie trailer. The videos he added into his video were very organized and funny. His audio was clear as well. I give this video a 39/40.

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                          kim Hernandez
                          05/28/2010 07:39

                          i reviewed Victoria Heshme's and Elliot Santiago's videos

                          Victoria:
                          I liked how the song fit well with the September 11 attacks. It's kind of sad to think about these events.
                          I give this video a 38/40

                          Elliot:
                          i'm confused which video is for the project but...
                          I found his video for Babies really enjoyable. It's hilarious and if this was a real movie, i'd watch it! I also like the Bleach / anime video. I'm not a fan of Bleach, but the editing and the music work well together.
                          i give his video a 39/40!

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                          Alex Garcia
                          05/28/2010 07:49

                          The two videos I reviewed were michael Luppino's and William Ao's. They both had good topics to make a story, but each added their own unique taste and flavor to make two great stories.
                          I gave Michael Luppino a 38/40, since he added great pictures, and appropriate music for each event in his oil spill video. A bit on the short side, but the video was great.
                          I gave William Ao a 37/40 beacause his story was unique, with a good topic. I just offer some advice to change his pacing on the pictures.

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                          Erin Kohm
                          05/28/2010 08:56

                          Alexis Skomina : 34 / 40
                          Used nice pictures , very descriptive and the song corresponded with the topic of the story.

                          Sean Geissler : 32 / 40
                          Good topic, related it too his life . But did not put it in the point of view as another person or tell it as a story.

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                          charlene castano
                          05/28/2010 10:53

                          i graded Shara joy Aya and Reshay. for Shara i gave her a 36/40 because she had good style of show and gave good picture on her story 3. then for reshay i gave her a 33/40 because she gave good examples and she had some emotions showing.

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                          Jaclyn A.
                          05/31/2010 18:36

                          I watched Kim Hernandez's and Lori Lee's videos. Kim's was about the volcano eruption in Ireland and Lori's was about the earthquake in Haiti. I clearly understood the message in both their videos, and I felt the emotion too. Their images, and video clips, fit very well with their stories. The audio also fit well with the story. So overall, I give Kim a 38 out of 40 and Lori a 39 out of 40.

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                          Brianna Walker
                          06/01/2010 07:34

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                          Brianna Walker
                          06/01/2010 07:35

                          I have reviewed Lori Lee and Katherine Foote's videos. I gave Lori a 38/40 because her video and music match up perfectly. I gave Katherine a 39/40 because her video and the rate at which she talked were perfect.

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                          Nida hussain
                          06/01/2010 07:56

                          I graded two digital stories which were of Kim Hernandez and Nicholas Martucci.

                          for Kim's video i would give her a 40/40, because i thought her video was really good, the sound effects were very interesting. Also the images were good they went with the stories and overall the story maintained a clear focus of the subject. For Nick i would also give him a 40/40 because his video was also good and the narration was clear, and i liked the music that he chose for the video.

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                          Nadia Zaki
                          06/02/2010 17:01

                          Caroline Swift: 38/40
                          Caroline's story contained very strong and clear photo's, and provided articulate and powerful captioning. The music backed up her story very nicely as well.

                          Anita Platis: 39/40
                          Anita's story was very informing and well detailed. She provided many facts and clear pictures about the giant panda. Her voice was clear and confident.

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                          11/29/2010 07:46

                          I graded Kevin Cahill's and Kaan Bulut's videos. Kevin's video was about the Mets and Kaan's video was about the Gulf Coast oil spill. I gave Kevin a 38/40 because his video had good images and lots of information.The pictures and story line were strong, although it was not from any point of view. The music was clear, but it didn't relate to the story, as spanish music have would. Overall, it was very good story and it as very informative.

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                          11/29/2010 07:52

                          The music was powerful and clear, and she had a very good video as evidence of the topic. I gave her video a 39/40. I graded Justina's and Ajene's digital story #3. I gave Justina a 38. She had clear pictures and a good topic. I gave Ajene a 32. SHe had clear pictures but she didnt have any usic which would enhance her video.

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