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                          Peer Reviews 05/07/2010
                          54 Comments
                           
                          Which digital stories did you review? What are your overall thoughts? What did you find consistent (the same) with the work? What was different amongst the stories?
                           


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                          Brianni Vincent
                          05/07/2010 05:52

                          I graded the digital stories of Ajene Meyers, Sierra White and Ryan Enderes. All three videos were consistent with the quality of their images and how well they assessed the topic. Ajene Meyers and Ryan Enderes both did not use sound narration nor a song. Sierra White did not use sound narration as well, but did substitute it with a song that went perfectly with her digital story.

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                          Jen Carullo
                          05/07/2010 05:52

                          I graded three if my peer's digital stories. I graded Jen Siliato's, Katherine Kelly's, and Erin Kohm's. They all used strong images and words to define the ida of their over all story. Katherine and Jen used son & music to define themselves and Erin used voice narration. All sounds were clear, including the voice narration and the overall quality of all three videos were very good.

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                          Angelia Lewis (:
                          05/07/2010 05:52

                          I commented on 3 different videos . One was someone's in this class & 2 were from other classes . Two had the same subject ( What they want to be when they grow up ) , & one about dance . I saw consistency in the type of music within the three . Each had music that was their type & relates to them & their video . All three made sure the pictures were clear & their text fit in . I gave all 3 above a 37 .

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                          Karis Robichaud
                          05/07/2010 05:53

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                          Nicolette Delgado
                          05/07/2010 05:53

                          I graded celeste's victoria geager's, and aisha's digital story 2. They all had writing and mages that went well with their story. Victoria and celeste had music. They did different topics. Victoria did the topic about school. Celeste and Aisha did the topic about their future. All three digital stories were good.

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                          sierra white
                          05/07/2010 05:55

                          i saw Brianni, Leorie, and Lori's digital storys. they were all really good and they all had music instead of a voice over. they music matched the story they were telling and it was just fun to watch. the difference between them is that they all want to be something different when they get older.

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                          Angelia Lewis (:
                          05/07/2010 05:55

                          * I forgot to mention who I commented on :
                          Karis . R
                          Anita . P
                          Caroline . S

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                          Madison Lock :D
                          05/07/2010 05:55

                          All of the videos I viewed were good. I watched Justina Konarzewskas, Nicolette Delgados, and Celeste Chows video. In all of these there were songs. Both Nicolette and Justina had the same song. The pictures were all good. Of these videos I watched two of them had text that went by to fast. They were all about the topic of dreams. They were very interesting. In one video she was undecided about what she wanted to be, but in the other two they were sure of what they wanted to be. All of the digital stories I watched were wonderful.

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                          Brandon Helfer
                          05/07/2010 05:56

                          I graded Phil Aleman, Kevin Cahill, Charlie Connelie, and Leorio Beriguette's second digital stories. I felt that they all did very well, and they wall earned over a 30 out of 40, even though they each had their own mistakes, the mistakes were minor, and they had good presentations.

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                          Karis Robichaud
                          05/07/2010 05:57

                          For the Digital story review, i graded Caroline Swift, Kathrine Kelly, and Elliot Santiago. I thought each video was great.Of course each video needed a improvement, but it was overall great.I enjoyed each video!

                          I thought each video was great with expressing the message, an they did a great using pictures and videos to help make the message become more clear.

                          The only difference throughout the video was each dream was different.
                          So i thought everybody did great in their videos!

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                          Victoria Geager
                          05/07/2010 05:57

                          After looking at Katherine Kelly, Brittney B and Celeste, i thought even though they were all about 3 completely different topics, they were all good. They all had very nice pictures and used music instead of voice overs. The topics of their stories were softball, 9/11 and dreams; they were all such different topics but were all good in their own ways.

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                          Lori Lee
                          05/07/2010 06:01

                          I reviewed Katherine Foote, Brianna Walker, and Caroline Pinsky's digital stories. All of their videos were made and planned out quite well. Katherine's digital story was quite different since she put a narration over an instrumental song throughout her video, which I found in her video, very creative. Brianna's digital story was very accurate on what she was going to do in the future and the images matched the song she chose very well. Caroline's digital story showed that her dreams were very high standards and that's very admirable. Overall, their videos were interesting and made very good.

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                          Chris Hepworth
                          05/07/2010 06:04

                          I graded Leorie Beriguete's,Alex Garcia's,and Kevin Cahill's videos. i thought all 3 videos were well done although Alex's video really didn't have music it was more sounds than anything. Kevin's and Leorie's videos related a lot because they were both about dreams and Alex's was about the United Nations. Also, non of the videos were close to identical to each other. They all had their own unique style.

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                          Aisha Balaquiot
                          05/07/2010 06:07

                          I reviewed Celeste Chow's, Brittni Bjornholm's, and Megan del Rosario's video. All three used good images that followed the purpose of there video. They did not use voice over, however they all used appropriate songs for their video.

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                          Destiny Audinett
                          05/07/2010 06:10

                          Let's see...I graded three stories (Anita Kathleen Platis, Jayme Farbowitz, and Lenny Pesce's). All three used music, no narration, but made great videos. They showed me their aspirations for the future quite clearly. Lenny and Jayme showed me how they hope all aspects of their lives will be, while Anita showed me only her main goal for the future. Lenny made one spelling mistake (not a big deal though, he just spelled inspiration wrong), and Jayme's text was a little hard to read once in a while (the text blended with the pictures a couple of times, so it was hard to read). There were specific things I liked about each video. In Jayme's video there was a wonderful rhyme scheme, and in Lenny's video the text, borders and pictures worked really well together. In Anita's video she included many pictures of herself and how she was well on her way to making her dreams come true. I believe all of their videos were way better than mine, and were really enjoyable to watch.

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                          Celeste Chow
                          05/07/2010 07:19

                          I graded Nicolette Delgados, Emily Fauske, and Shara Joy's videos. Overall the videos were good, but none of them had voice narration, but they all had music. The only thing that the text was either hard to read or disappeared to quickly, but they all had good images.

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                          Shara Aya
                          05/07/2010 07:21

                          I graded Megan del Rosario, Celeste Chow, and Emily Fauske. All were wonderful and showed a particular story. They all shared the same song, but the song describe their story specifically. All did a wonderful job!

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                          kaan bulut
                          05/07/2010 07:21

                          I commented on three videos one of them was Jen her video was really good it showed home videos. It showed pics of her own life and was very clear. I also watched Seans video it was mediocore, but showed a lot of good pictures. The watched stephens videos it made no sense but showed voice narrarition wich was good. Together the videos are the best

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                          Celeste Chow
                          05/07/2010 07:23

                          I viewed Nicolette Delgados, Emily Fauskes, and Shara Joy's blogs. Overall their videos were good. They all used music instead of the voice narration. They had good images all of them but the text was either hard to read or disappeared to fast to read on them.

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                          Emily Fauske
                          05/07/2010 07:23

                          I graded celeste chow, chris court, and ewa's videos. They all did an excellent job and no one got less then a 35 out of 40. Celeste Chow and Chris Court both had great images and their songs went well with the point they were trying to make. I thought Ewa's was very unique because she is the only one who used her voice in her presentation as well as an extra video in her digital story!

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                          Sean Fisher
                          05/07/2010 07:24

                          I reviewed various people's blog, such as Kim Her., Kevin C, and Justina's. I found that they used images and meaningful music to tell their "story".

                          I feel that they did a superb job. :D

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                          Philip Aleman
                          05/07/2010 07:24

                          I graded Brandon Helfer, Eliot Santiago, and Charlie Coneley's videos. They all had good images, but no one used voice narration. they all also had pretty good music that went with their videos.

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                          Michael Luppino
                          05/07/2010 07:25

                          I graded Alex Garcia, Sean Fisher, and Caroline Swift's blog video. Each video contains no narration, but there is a musical beat that fits each video theme. The each differ in various waYs: Alex's video was about the United Nations, Sean's video was about his Switzerland Exchange, and Caroline's video was about her future goals. All videos used music that perfect fits each theme of each video. All videos were great!

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                          charlie connelly
                          05/07/2010 07:27

                          i graded Courtney Springer, Justina Konarzewska, and Gabrielle LaFata, all of the videos had good pictures to go along with the music in each story. Courtney's video had voice narration but needed the music to be lower because the voice wasn't clear. all the videos followed through with there purpose

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                          Courtney Springer
                          05/07/2010 07:32

                          I reviewed three different videos. One of them was Charlie Connely. All three of them had at least one or more spelling mistakes. Overall tey were good, the had very good pictures.

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                          Caroline Swift
                          05/07/2010 07:42

                          I graded three videos. The people were: Caroline Pinsky, Karis Robichaud, and Nadia Zaki. The videos all had a very good message, and the songs were very clear. Karis and Caroline chose to have a song play in their video, while Nadia Zaki decided to do a voice over, and play a song in the background. I graded each video a 37/40. There was a good amount of images at a steady pace and they described the topic of their video very well.

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                          Jayme Farbowitz
                          05/07/2010 07:44

                          I reviewed Brianna walker, Katherine Foote, and Kim hernandez's video. Each one was different. Katherine had narration, Brianna had no no music, and Kim had music. Each one was good in their own right, and all were based on their future/what they are now. All of them got above a 30 in my book. :)

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                          Stephen Gross
                          05/07/2010 07:44

                          I graded the digital stories of Jen Siliato, Bola Taiwo and Nasir Kujenya. They were all very good. None of the had voiceovers, but they all had great music. Bola's was a little short, so I gave it a little lower grade than the other two.

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                          Ajene Meyers
                          05/07/2010 07:48

                          i graded jennifer s, courtney s, and charlie c, and i found that they all had different ways of expressing their themes. courtney used voice and music to bring across her point. jennifer used videos to get across her point. overall these videos were extremely well put together.

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                          Brianna Walker
                          05/07/2010 07:48

                          The three videos I reviewed belonged to Elliot Santiago, Katherine Foot, and Kim Hernandez. I found each video very well made and very accurate of what they expected of their lives. The only difference was that Katherine used her actual voice where as Kim and Elliot used music.

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                          Lizette Cruz
                          05/07/2010 07:51

                          For the digital story 2 review, I graded Caroline Swift, Caroline Pinsky, and Karis Robichaud. I thought that all of there digital stories were good because they fitted very well with the grading criteria. They all used good images that somewhat related to the story. There captions were also very good because there wasn't any grammar mistakes or spelling mistakes. Although none of them used voice narration, they all used a good song that fitted well with the theme of the story. They all had a good grade because all of there digital stories were amazing :D

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                          Victoria Heshme
                          05/07/2010 10:45

                          I graded Kim Hernandez, Leorie Beriguete, and Brandon Helfer for digital story 2. I thought all their stories were very interesting and they all used good music and pictures to go with their stories. None of them used voice narrations but their videos were still very good :)

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                          Natalie Allen
                          05/07/2010 10:49

                          For the digital story 2 review, i graded Andrew Casale, Jose Sanches, and Jennifer Silliato. All of these stories fitted the graing ruberic, The three video all contained music and pictures that fit with the theme. Jen and Jose's videos were about their dreams while Andrew's video was about starvation. None of these videos used voice recordings, but the music they chose fit well. I gave all of these videos a score over 37.

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                          Katherine Foote
                          05/07/2010 10:50

                          I graded the Digital Stories made by Lori L, Brianna W, and Ewa W. All three stories had high quality pictures that went nicely with their narrative. The pictures that they all used were also timed well. Out of the three, Ewa was the only one that used voice narration and a clip of a video. Lori had a song, and Brianna had neither. However, she made up for the lack of sound by providing text that explained each picture.

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                          Anita Kathleen Platis
                          05/07/2010 10:52

                          The videos that I graded were those of Katherine Kelly, Nadia Zaki, and Angelia Lewis. All of their videos had a stable purpose and point that they were trying to convey. They all had a great amount of edited, appealing pictures and music that went along with the flow. All of the videos were just the right amount of time, and definitely caught my interest. Nadia even used voice narration in hers.

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                          William Ao
                          05/07/2010 10:54

                          I graded Bola Taiwo , Celeste Chow , and Courtney Springer's videos. They all used imagery that supported their topic. I graded Bola a 29 for grammer , and the video being too fast. I graded Celeste a 37 because although the pictures and music went well , the text went by too quickly. I graded Courtney a 35 because although the images and music was good, sometimes I cant hear what she is saying because the music is too loud

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                          Sal barone
                          05/07/2010 10:55

                          I reviewed 3 videos one being Alex Garcia, two being Hayward Yatco and 3 being Bola. These three videos are about 1. the UN
                          2. Nyc and staten island
                          3. music over time.
                          The most common thing in these video was music. The problem with both were speed and visual clarity.

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                          Erin Kohm
                          05/07/2010 10:55

                          I graded three digital stories, I used the rubric for each. I did Jennifer Carullo's, Jennifer Siliato's and Charlene Castano's. Each one were very different but they were all good, the music matched them all very well and Charlene had voice narration & added in videos that were really good. The pictures were clear and timed well, as long as matching the story they were telling very well .

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                          Tyler Leung
                          05/07/2010 10:59

                          I graded Michael Luppino, Chris Hepworth and Lenny Pesce's digital stories. They all created very good digital stories. They all did not use voice narration, but all of them should have put meaningful songs in the story to make it more interesting. Chris did a video that talked about his future, and Mike and Lenny did videos that inform others of worldly events and topics that raise concern and awareness.

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                          Nadia Zaki
                          05/07/2010 11:01

                          I graded three video's that belonged to my peers Caroline Swift, Caroline Pinksky, and Karis Robichaud. All three of them based their future now video on the same topic, what and or who they wanted to become when they got older. They all used great pictures to tell their stories, and all of the stories were very easy to follow. The all used text to tell their stories rather than having a voice over. The difference between the video's is that Karis talked about more than what career she wanted when she got older, she also talked about how she wanted to travel and start a family. I felt that all of the stories were great and unique. None of the videos received less than a 37 out of 40.

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                          Ewa Wawrzonek
                          05/07/2010 11:07

                          I graded Katherine Foote , Anita Platis and Charlene Castano. All of the stories embraced the topic and 2 of them had voice narration. The images that they put in made the videos really good. The music in the stories made them complete.

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                          Meagan Edwards link
                          05/07/2010 11:07

                          For the 3 digital stories i graded Celeste Chow's, Madison Lock's and Anita Platis. Each of their stories have a couple things in common. They all use strong images to show they understood the task. They all used text instead of voice narration. I think that they all should have used voice narration because it would have made their stories a little better

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                          Brittni Bjornholm
                          05/07/2010 11:08

                          I graded Donna Cucuzza Megan DelRosario, and Natalie Allen's videos. They all had a song, but no voice narration. They're videos were well organized and the text went well with the song and pictures. Megan's video was about her future and what she wanted to do with her life. Donna and Natalie focused on one topic.

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                          Sean Geissler
                          05/07/2010 11:09

                          I graded 3 of my peers videos Erin Kohm, Jen Carullo, and Trevor Gnyp. All 3 videos that i reviewed has clear images that help to follow the story and consistent voice/sound to also help follow/tell the story. All the videos I reviewed also were just long enough and none were to short.

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                          katherine Kelly
                          05/07/2010 11:19

                          I graded Jennifer Siliato, Anita Platis, and Meagan Edwards. All the videos were on task. Meagan's had voice narration and it matched with the pictures. Anita and Jennifer had songs and went with the pictures.

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                          Andrew Casale
                          05/07/2010 11:20

                          I comment on Angelia Lewis, Reshay Bailey, and Emily fauske. All videos were really good with great music, and sound quality. All videos got higher than 35/40 and had great pictures.

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                          Andrew Casale
                          05/07/2010 11:24

                          I graded Reshay Bailey, Emily Fauske, and Angelia Lewis. All projects got graded 35/40 or higher. All movies had great picture and sound quality, as well as meaning and good technology usage.

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                          charlene castano
                          05/07/2010 11:26

                          i graded a few people and when i graded it they actually did good in most of them they had aleast 38/40.

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                          Nida
                          05/10/2010 18:24

                          I graded Kim Hernandez,Caroline pinsky,and Kaan Bulut's story. I thought all of the stories were great, and mostly the score was 39,37,and a 38 out of 40. All the videos used songs and pictures which was a good thing,overall they were all good.

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                          Reshay Bailey
                          05/27/2010 07:25

                          i graded Emily Fauske, Ajene Meyeres, and Ryan Enderes. All of their stories were good. ryan and ajene did not have music but their videos were pretty strong without the music. it was good .

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                          Jaclyn Appelgate
                          05/28/2010 07:46

                          I graded Brianna Walker, Destiny Audinette, and Lori Lee. I gave all three of them a 38 out of 40. All of the images worked well with the story, so did the audio they added. Overall though, I really enjoyed their stories.

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                          Michael Odumosu
                          05/30/2010 17:49

                          I have graded Nicole,Akeem and James. Overal ill give them a 36 out of 40. All 3 of their video showed the point of view of and showed great quality pictures to back up the main idea

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                          kursy językowe kraków link
                          11/29/2010 07:48

                          They're videos were well organized and the text went well with the song and pictures.They were very interesting. In one video she was undecided about what she wanted to be, but in the other two they were sure of what they wanted to be. All of the digital stories I watched were wonderful.

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                          pościel dla dzieci link
                          11/29/2010 07:55

                          I thought Ewa's was very unique because she is the only one who used her voice in her presentation as well as an extra video in her digital story! I graded three if my peer's digital stories. I graded Jen Siliato's, Katherine Kelly's, and Erin Kohm's.

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